- Put the IP somewhere obvious (maybe in the top navbar or on the home page)
- If possible, make text and images appear faster on Meet the Staff and About
There are also a couple instances of typos or awkward phrasing:
Home
✗ "The launch of the lobby was a huge success sparking interest in many peoples interest in Oresfall."
✔ "The launch of the lobby was a huge success, sparking many people's interest in Oresfall!"
About
✗ "Oresfall is a place where you can have fun.
A place where you can relax and play Minecraft with your friends.
Oresfall is the largest and most popular Origins Minecraft server."
✔ "Oresfall is a place where you can have fun, relax, and play Minecraft with your friends. It is the largest and most popular Origins Minecraft server!"
News
✗ "If your not already in it join our discord"
✔ "If you're not already in it, join our Discord!"
I hope this helps a little! The website is looking very cool :)
Some ideas:
- Link the store somewhere )
- Link the wiki somewhere
- Put the IP somewhere obvious (maybe in the top navbar or on the home page)
- If possible, make text and images appear faster on Meet the Staff and About
There are also a couple instances of typos or awkward phrasing:
Home
✗ "The launch of the lobby was a huge success sparking interest in many peoples interest in Oresfall."
✔ "The launch of the lobby was a huge success, sparking many people's interest in Oresfall!"
About
✗ "Oresfall is a place where you can have fun.
A place where you can relax and play Minecraft with your friends.
Oresfall is the largest and most popular Origins Minecraft server."
✔ "Oresfall is a place where you can have fun, relax, and play Minecraft with your friends. It is the largest and most popular Origins Minecraft server!"
News
✗ "If your not already in it join our discord"
✔ "If you're not already in it, join our Discord!"
I hope this helps a little! The website is looking very cool :)